Blog EntryWhen Eyelashes MeetOct 21, '06 11:21 PM
for everyone

Many would take a picture
When the opportunity is golden
But I just open my eyes
And absorb every moment

Chances are not about their colour
That's what we never realize
And we miss millions of phrases
With each passing second of our lives

For if a picture paints a thousand words
Then we should take a thousand tries
To capture every frame that we see
For these words are never lies

But we will witness many scenes
That we might not enjoy
We face hardships through reality
Thus dreams are for us to toy

Treasures may be gone in a blink
But it would be futile to stare
For only by accepting our loss
Can we repair our despair

Although they might be gone
But their exsistance lives on
In forms of moving images in our minds
Memories are born

Just like voicing our thoughts
I'm wording my feelings
And hoping these words of mine
Are worth more than a painting

A blink of an eye can bring changes
We just gotta comprehend it
And learn to admire the visions that conjure
When our eyelashes meet









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roosh8 wrote on Oct 21, '06
wooohooooooo!
yongxin wrote on Oct 22, '06
ahh...beautiful!!!
eunicetan wrote on Oct 22, '06, edited on Oct 22, '06
It's beautiful really. But it comes across kinda forced at times, the rhyming parts.
magicy2l wrote on Oct 22, '06
ooo nice
schizzow wrote on Oct 22, '06
Actually this wasn't the original piece. The one which took me four hours to carefully piece together totally disappeared - no thanks to Multiply, and I reconstructed this one from the bits that I can (hardly) remember. Sigh. I'm damn disappointed la. T.T
schizzow wrote on Oct 22, '06
But thanks peoples!
tidurman wrote on Oct 22, '06
mm sek yan siong... pai seh... hohoho
epxy wrote on Oct 22, '06
aiks.... type in notepad or something le next time...
epxy wrote on Oct 22, '06
it is nice ..... btw
glacius wrote on Oct 22, '06
sweet.
glacius wrote on Oct 22, '06
when I read the title of the journal without clicking yet, I thought that your eyelashes got entangled and caused sufferable pain T.T


But i'm glad it's a poem!!! XDDDD
carynpy wrote on Oct 22, '06
nice-ness...:)
viiolet wrote on Oct 22, '06
a beautiful one, barney =)
wormy wrote on Oct 22, '06
=)
i can't write. :(
magicy2l wrote on Oct 22, '06
but u sure know how to act.. act drunk to be specific..
wormy wrote on Oct 22, '06
T.T
pixie84 wrote on Oct 22, '06
:D :D :D :D
schizzow wrote on Oct 22, '06
:D
divaangel86 wrote on Oct 22, '06
love it
glacius wrote on Oct 22, '06
I can't write too T.T
glacius wrote on Oct 22, '06
oh wait. just found this piece for inspiration. lol
glacius wrote on Oct 22, '06
fuck la.suck in writing already
eunicetan wrote on Oct 23, '06
Multiply really can be a bitch :(
wormy wrote on Oct 23, '06
i can't write :(
glacius wrote on Oct 24, '06
wormy said
i can't write :(
babilin wrote on Oct 24, '06
sobsob. it brings tears to my eyes.............
schizzow wrote on Oct 24, '06
Nononoes
That wasn't my intention! :(
wormy wrote on Oct 24, '06
i can't help but laugh at ur reply. lol.
divaangel86 wrote on Oct 24, '06
XD
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